Stranded

I woke up and realized that I was in the middle of the southern ocean! I was standing on one single piece of ice that was only big enough to fit me on it. I was worried for my family when they wake up they’ll be looking for me and they’ll get so emotional and distraught when they find out that i’m no longer there. I tried to find a way to get back to some sort of land but i was completely stranded with no food and water for me to survive on. Right there and then I fainted!

One Reply to “Stranded”

  1. Hi Zac
    You have managed to paint a very strong picture of the Polar Bear’s distress at being stranded. You’ve described his/her situation on realising that it was on a very small piece of ice and that it had no food and no water. I like how you also included that the polar bear was worried for family who would be out searching. You left your 100 word challenge on a great cliffhanger and I’m wondering and hoping that somehow the Polar Bear was rescued. Well done.
    Máire O’Keeffe (Team 100wc)
    Galway, Ireland

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