Demolition Derby

“Ladies and Gentleman welcome to tonight’s demolition derby!”                                “Tonight’s track is figure of 8,” yelled the announcer.                                                    As the cars approached the track a sky of dust surrounded the racers. Out of the dust appeared the best racer in the demolition derby competition “Racoon Wrecker!” Driving this car was the famous Mr Box in his chair that won him 247 races!  As he headed towards the start line Mr Plant came up behind him in his leaf shaped car. No one knows why though? He usually is in his car “the fly trap” but not today. The last time he used this was in the 1965 series!

One Reply to “Demolition Derby”

  1. Hi Zac,

    I LOVED the image of “a sky of dust”. You managed to create a wonderful atmosphere in your writing, well done. I am still wondering if Mr Plant will win the race in his unusual leaf car…

    I look forward to your next piece.


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