The Night Of The Dead!

As Jack was swaggering down the street the cold air sent a shiver down his spine.  As he approached the cemetery he heard a deafening screech down the walkway of the cemetery. Then out of nowhere there was a hand that was running down the side of the grave! “Hello who’s there?” yelled Jack. Then people started to scream and they were getting louder and louder! The deafening screams echoed through the cold night and Jack became terrified. Just after the screams had finished a sound started to say “Hello we are your best friends and cant wait to see you in your human self!” Then Jack fainted.

One Reply to “The Night Of The Dead!”

  1. Hi Zac,
    What a great story! I loved the word ‘swaggering’. You created a great image with the phrase ‘ shiver down his spine’. Well done and keep up the great writing.
    Mrs O Sullivan.

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